Closure

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by asdfghjkl (Account disabled) on Wednesday, 12-Oct-2005 19:26:01

It's been a while;


do you remember me?


I see your smile


when you're with friends, excluding me.


Am I invisible?


Do I cross your mind, your dreams,


or have I been erased


from your memory?

Post 2 by poet (The premium poet) on Wednesday, 12-Oct-2005 21:25:12

Excellently written!

Post 3 by poet (The premium poet) on Wednesday, 12-Oct-2005 21:25:23

Excellently written!

Post 4 by poet (The premium poet) on Wednesday, 12-Oct-2005 21:25:23

Excellently written!

Post 5 by poet (The premium poet) on Wednesday, 12-Oct-2005 21:25:25

Excellently written!

Post 6 by Happy Little Faith (One day closer to eternity! Wahoooooooo!) on Wednesday, 12-Oct-2005 21:28:19

Sweet work!!!!!!!!! Yea for sissy!!!!

Post 7 by asdfghjkl (Account disabled) on Wednesday, 12-Oct-2005 21:30:21

Thanks, Chelse and Jord, but could you say that one more time, Jord? Didn't quite hear ya there! LMAO, JK. *Hugs to All,* Mel.

Post 8 by Grace (I've now got the ggold prolific poster award! wahoo! well done to me!) on Thursday, 13-Oct-2005 5:31:37

Sound like a song that is being sung... good rythem and keep on writing. As Life Flows on...Connie

Post 9 by poet (The premium poet) on Thursday, 13-Oct-2005 19:40:22

Sorry, Mel! Computer posted it that many times, not me!

Post 10 by asdfghjkl (Account disabled) on Friday, 14-Oct-2005 20:05:38

LOL, thanks, Connie, and I was just kidding, Jordan. *Hugs to All,* Mel.

Post 11 by poet (The premium poet) on Wednesday, 19-Oct-2005 19:51:52

Mel, sorry I keep posting, but, seriously, you, as well as some others on here, should really consider becoming professional poets some day!
Write back.

Post 12 by singingsensation (I just keep on posting!) on Tuesday, 21-Aug-2007 16:48:03

I agree with Poet. That was really good, Mel. Hugs to ya, sissy!! Macy

Post 13 by Miss Gorgeous (I'm going for the prolific poster awards!) on Thursday, 27-Sep-2007 14:31:41

Nice song/poem. Your good words, and good ideas behind it. Well written, nice job on that. Hey, write some more songs.